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Poll

01 February 2006 @ 4:35 p.m.

I am self-deluded, that sultry rebel one side and a compliant the other.

Please poll for your favourite female character in my stories/poem because I would like to have changes/improvements in my writing:

1. BEAUTY - The Vampire's Courtship:
Beauty was the daughter of a concubine, and she was a servant of her stepmother's household.
(her mother killed by her stepmother)

She fell in love later with her godmother (the snake) and her son - a vampire. (Both cursed from the stepmother). After her self-discovery in the southern prince's ball, Beauty posed revenge where she killed her stepmother and father.

2. MONIQUE - Broken Heels and Stillettos

Monique was a child from a well-to-do, upper class family, only to be raped by her lustful father. She fled to New York and made herself a diva in her publishing job, yet was trapped the vicious cycle of sex due to her childhood fears of her father's rape.

Similarly, Monique shot her dad as he tried to molest her in New York, married her lawyer and devout her life to help rape victims.

3. Eve - Eve's song of regret
Just looking at Eve from a different angle where she felt remorse for being bewitched and lured by the snake to eat the apple from the Tree of Wisdom.

PLEASE DECIDE YOUR FAVOURITE CHARACTER, IT WILL RESULT IN CHANGES IN GOTHCHYLD'S WRIITNG.

YOUR ADVICE AND COMMENTS ARE MUCH LOVED AND VALUED! 

 

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